雅思考官Simon寫作小作文9分范文柱狀圖年齡分布

雅思寫作一直以來(lái)以起靈活、發(fā)散的特點(diǎn)備受考生們關(guān)注，同樣也是各類雅思預(yù)測(cè)中的?？停≌驹谶@里為同學(xué)們整理了雅思考官Simon的小作文9分范文，希望對(duì)備考的同學(xué)們有所幫助。今天放送的是常見(jiàn)的柱狀圖，內(nèi)容有關(guān)年齡分布問(wèn)題，難度不大。

 

 

柱狀圖：年齡分布

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.下方的柱狀圖比較了法國(guó)和印度1984年的人口年齡結(jié)構(gòu)

 

 

The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.

It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.

In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.

Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women, while just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.

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