Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on treasuring every moment by commenting on the remark, “Every single thing that has ever happened in your life is preparing you for a moment that is yet to come .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
審題立意
1. 導(dǎo)語(yǔ)解讀：要求考生根據(jù)題目的要求，從評(píng)論“生活中發(fā)生的每一件事都是在為你的未來(lái)做準(zhǔn)備”入手，就“珍惜每一刻”這一話(huà)題展開(kāi)論述。
2. 文章立意：時(shí)間是寶貴的，應(yīng)珍惜每一刻。
寫(xiě)作思路
1. 第一段簡(jiǎn)要就題目中給定的話(huà)語(yǔ)做出評(píng)論，引出論點(diǎn)：應(yīng)該珍惜每一刻。
2. 第二段用人們熟知的說(shuō)法“時(shí)間就是金錢(qián)”來(lái)論證珍惜時(shí)間的重要性：時(shí)不我待，金錢(qián)難買(mǎi)。
3. 第三段采用人們熟知的說(shuō)法“時(shí)間就是生命”來(lái)論證珍惜時(shí)間的重要性：浪費(fèi)時(shí)間就等于浪費(fèi)生命。
4. 第四段總結(jié)二、三段的分論點(diǎn)，再次突出珍惜每一刻的重要性。
參考范文
“Every single thing that has ever happened in your life is preparing you for a moment that is yet to come.” This remark tells us that we should treasure every minute and do something meaningful. 1
Time is money. 2 Time flies and never waits for anyone. We cannot reclaim time once it passes by no matter how much money you have. For this reason, time is even more precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn more. However, when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value time.
Time is life. 2 As we all know, life is limited and every minute is extremely precious for us. However, if one kills time, such as doing nothing all day or spending much time playing computer games, he will be good for nothing. In this sense, wasting time is equal to wasting a part of one’s valuable life. On the contrary, if one makes full use of every minute to do something meaningful, he will make a great achievement over a long period of time.
Money and life are two of the most important things for us. Therefore, treasure every moment you have. Seize the time, seize the day! 3
“生活中發(fā)生的每一件事都是在為你的未來(lái)做準(zhǔn)備。”這句話(huà)告訴我們，要珍惜每時(shí)每刻，做有意義的事情。
時(shí)間就是金錢(qián)。時(shí)間如流水，歲月不待人。一旦時(shí)間流走，即使有再多的錢(qián)我們也買(mǎi)不回來(lái)。因此，時(shí)間要比金錢(qián)更加寶貴。錢(qián)花了，我們可以再掙。然而，時(shí)間沒(méi)了就再也回不來(lái)了。這就是我們?yōu)槭裁匆湎r(shí)間的原因。
時(shí)間就是生命。眾所周知，生命是有限的，對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)，每一秒都異常珍貴。然而，如果一個(gè)人消磨時(shí)間，比如成天什么事都不做或者花大量的時(shí)間玩電腦游戲，他將一事無(wú)成。從這種意義上講，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間就等于浪費(fèi)一個(gè)人寶貴生命的一部分。相反，如果一個(gè)人爭(zhēng)分奪秒地做有意義的事，經(jīng)過(guò)較長(zhǎng)的一段時(shí)間他就可以獲得重大的成就。
金錢(qián)和生命對(duì)我們來(lái)說(shuō)是兩項(xiàng)最重要的東西。因此，珍惜每時(shí)每刻，抓緊時(shí)間，抓緊每一天。
范文點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. 開(kāi)篇簡(jiǎn)要解釋題目中話(huà)語(yǔ)的含義，引出論點(diǎn)，緊扣作文話(huà)題。
2. 分兩個(gè)層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)：時(shí)間就是金錢(qián)；時(shí)間就是生命。層次清晰，論證有力。
3. 末段總結(jié)全文，并再次指出我們應(yīng)該珍惜每一刻，呼應(yīng)主題。
要點(diǎn)用法
precious adj. 寶貴的；珍貴的
kill time 消磨時(shí)光
be good for nothing 一無(wú)是處
on the contrary 相反
make full use of every minute 爭(zhēng)分奪秒
句法點(diǎn)評(píng)
1. However, if one kills time, such as doing nothing all day or spending much time playing computer games, he will be good for nothing.
此句中用到了such as這一介詞短語(yǔ)，因此后面接動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)doing nothing all day or spending much time...。such as表示列舉，意為“例如……”。
2. In this sense, wasting time is equal to wasting a part of one’s valuable life.
本句采用的是動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)wasting time作主語(yǔ)，而句中的動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)wasting a part of one’s valuable life作介詞to的賓語(yǔ)。
