高考英語滿分作文:2020年浙江卷2

2020年浙江卷

第二節(jié)

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Onefall，my wifeElliand I had a single goal:tophotographpolar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capitalof the world”-the town of Churchill in Manitoba，Canada.

Takingpicturesof polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears-likeall wild animals-should be photographed from asafedistance. When I'mface to face with a polar bear，Ilike it to be through acamerawith a telephoto lens. But sometimes，thatis easier said than done. This was one of those times.

AsElli and I cooked dinner，ayoung male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed，andsmelled our garlicbread.

Thehungry bear followed his nose to our camp，whichwas surrounded by a high wirefence. He pulled and bit the wire. Hestood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.

Terrified，Elliand I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear，hitpots hard，and fired blank shotgunshells into the air. Sometimes loudnoiseslike these will scare bearsoff. Not this polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down the fence withhis massive paws(爪子).

Iradioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way，butit would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this closeencounter(相遇)，Itook some pictures of the bear.

Elliand I feared the fence wouldn't last through 30 more minutes of the bear'spunishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepperspray. The sprayburns the bears' eyes，but doesn't hurt them. So Iapproached our uninvited guest slowly and，throughthe fence，sprayed him in the face. Withan angry roar(吼叫)，thebearranto the lake to wash his eyes.

有一年秋天，我和妻子艾莉只有一個目標:拍攝北極熊。

我們當時住在“世界北極熊之都”——加拿大馬尼托巴省丘吉爾鎮(zhèn)外的一個研究營地里。

給北極熊拍照是令人驚奇的，但也是危險的。

北極熊——像所有的野生動物一樣——應該在安全距離外拍攝。

當我和北極熊面對面的時候，我喜歡通過一個帶長焦鏡頭的相機。

但有時，說起來容易做起來難。

這就是其中之一。

我和艾莉做飯時，一只在附近湖里玩耍的年輕雄性北極熊聞了聞我們的大蒜面包。

這只饑餓的熊跟著鼻子來到了我們的營地，營地四周有高高的鐵絲圍欄。

他咬了咬電線。

他用后腿站立，推著籬笆的木樁。

我和艾莉嚇壞了，用盡了我們知道的所有熊的防御手段。

我們對著熊大喊大叫，狠狠地打了幾槍，還向空中發(fā)射了空彈。

有時像這樣的噪音會把熊嚇跑。

不是這只北極熊雖然他一直試圖拆除籬笆和他巨大的爪子爪(子)。

我用無線電向營地經(jīng)理尋求幫助。

他告訴我一架直升機已經(jīng)在路上了，但還要30分鐘才能到。

做最好的親密接觸(相遇),我拍了一些照片。

艾莉和我擔心圍欄撐不過熊懲罰的30分鐘。

營地經(jīng)理建議我用胡椒噴霧。

噴霧劑會灼傷熊的眼睛，但不會傷害它們。

于是我慢慢走近這位不速之客，穿過柵欄，朝他臉上噴了一槍。

與憤怒的吼吼叫),熊跑到湖洗他的眼睛。

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【滿分范文】

One possible version:

Para 1:

A few minutes later, the bear headed back toour camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, forhe seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. Myheart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elligrabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. Itworked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn't longbefore he ate up all the  bread and cameback again.

Para 2:

At that very moment, the helicopter arrived.“Thank goodness we are saved!" EIli cried out. Once the helicopter landed,we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on thehelicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torndown the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out thecamera and photographed the rare scene - we were robbed by a polar bear! (續(xù)寫 詞數(shù): 153)

一個可能的版本:

帕拉1:

幾分鐘后，這只熊回到了我們的營地。

然后我們意識到，浪花只會讓它更加憤怒，因為這次它看起來更兇猛了，像瘋了一樣猛烈地推著柵欄。

我的心狂跳著，不知道該怎么辦。

在這個關鍵時刻，艾莉抓起幾片蒜蓉面包扔過了柵欄。

它工作!

熊停止了攻擊，跑向面包。

但是沒過多久他就把所有的面包都吃光了，又回來了。

Para2:

就在那時，直升機趕到了。

“謝天謝地，我們得救了!”

EIli喊道。

直升飛機一著陸，我們馬上就上了飛機，既興奮又放心。

當我們安全的坐在直升飛機上時，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)熊終于撕毀了圍欄，向我們留下的食物跑去。

我迅速拿出相機，拍下了罕見的一幕——我們被一只北極熊搶劫了!