小學英語作文:勇敢的嘗試 Brave Try

Last week, my father took me to the swimming pool, he told me that I should learn to swimming, so that I could protect myself when I meet the emergent situation. I was so afraid of the water at the beginning, my father asked to be brave, I tried to go into the water many times, finally I made it. It is a good try for me, I believe I can swim soon. 
上周，我的爸爸帶我到游泳池，他告訴我應該要學會游泳，這樣我在遇到緊急情況時能夠保護自己。剛開始，我很害怕水，爸爸叫我要勇敢，我嘗試著多次下水，最后我終于成功了。這對于我來說是很好的嘗試，我相信我很快就會游泳了。