常見形式:
(1)、名詞+插入語/句+代詞+謂語……{刪除代詞}
例句:2T1:But salespeople, typically the most……, they have traditionally been reward…..
2T2: The exception, however, it may be a little-known……
(2)、代詞+ 名詞+謂語…….{刪除名詞}
例句:3T1: This supply allows trainees to…….
2、 過去分詞作后置定語,引導詞多余 {刪除引導詞}
常見形式:
(1)、2T1:Team-based pay is more in line with the organization’s objectives than pay which based on individual achievement.
(2)、2T4:Data Facts Limited is an expanding management services company whose based in the north of England.
It will be necessary for those who appointed to work a certain number of evenings and weekends.
3、 介詞亂用 {刪除介詞}
常見形式:
1、導致句意不符,文意不通
(1)、2T1:The biggest problem is for defining the team in the first place.
(2)、2T2:The individual learning account scheme is by the latest government scheme……
(3)、3T2:Regus centers can be found out in prominent
(4)、3T2:In addition to being fully furnished and equipped up
2、導致主語缺少,句子結(jié)構(gòu)混亂
(1)、3T2:In each center contains a range of facilities, including serviced offices, meeting rooms, reception areas……
3、介詞加于及物動詞之后
update on your internet skills; involve in sth; resemble to sth; crash down sth; offer for; tip over; dominate on the…
4、不定式當目的狀語,不用how引導 {刪除how}
常見形式:
(1)、2T3: We focus on our strategy how to achieve market leadership.
(2)、3T4:The purpose of the campaign is how to reinforce our position …….
5 、詞義重復 {刪除多余單詞}
常見形式:
Whole life-long learning; new change; sure success; three years time…….
6、固定搭配 {刪除多余單詞}
常見形式:
in the cake decorating=in doing sth
provide with both leadership and …….provide sth to sb=provide sb with sth
go on through a questionnaire(go on 繼續(xù)做 go through 執(zhí)行)
doing the business 經(jīng)商
take up a look at 看一看
have done an affiliation with 與….有聯(lián)系,與….有從屬關(guān)系
take into your account 考慮到
still further on進一步
under the pressure 在壓力之下
7、動詞重復/多余
need appoint (need to do sth/need sth)
will have report directly
will make maximize the…..
8、雙謂語 {刪除多余謂語}
But take a good on-site training courses can include …….
Work seems like to take over a disproportionate part of our lives
It’s more important to make use that time well than to work more hours.